WALT: To show not tell
As I start to float off the ground my hair starts to glow in the sunshine. I look down all I can see is the dark town before the sunrise. When I soar through the mystical sky above the hills, I look down. I can see all the town coming to life. all the shops are opening up, all the curtains are opening. I look up thinking this is the best view well at least that's what I thought. When I look up I can see something in the distance what could it be? That was the end of my big balloon.
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