We went to Curious Cove for our school camp here is us at the top of the mountain:
And here is a link to a video of Curious Cove:
WALT:Write a Descriptive piece of writing
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As the Sweat rushes off my Steaming face. All I hear is Crunch Crunch below my Aching Ankles and my stiff legs. I’m thinking in my head “so this is what Mt Kahikatea does to you” . I stop and Glare up and into the Blinding sunlight I see blue sky. “Were on ridge” Tony shouts out Everyone shouts relief “HOORAY” “come on keep up we're not there yet” Everyone groans but keeps at it and before I know it where at the top Everyone falls to the ground after a few groups went out onto the ledge it was my turn we walk down and
WOW!
I’m speechless Everyone was spamming their device with millions of photos it was so amazing. We catch up with the others I sighed with relief saying “I’m Glad that's over” Dad said almost laughing “Were not down yet”
45 mins Later
“FINALLY the solid ground”
BY SAMMY
Ni Hao Sam
ReplyDeleteI really like your discripitve writing and the fact that how you added a video.
Your story made me feel like I was climbing the mountain. In your story you have capital letter in the middle of sentences where they dont need to be.
What was you favourite part about camp?