Friday 14 August 2015

Color Poem - Cherry Red

Cherry red
Cherry Red sounds like a beautiful summers morning
Cherry Red looks like a big bright rose in it’s bloom
Cherry Red smells like freshly  baked red velvet cupcakes just been pulled out of the oven
Cherry Red tastes like the beautiful consistency of the juicy berries
Cherry Red feels like the the blood of a graze dripping down my leg when I trip over my lace.

2 comments:

  1. Sammy is this your favourite colour? I had a wee giggle when I read the part about you tripping over your lace. Is your knee better now? Great writing!

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  2. Hi Samantha
    This is a great piece of writing!
    I like the sudden change from the cupcakes to the blood I really wasn't expecting that!
    From Ella M

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