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Girl On String

WALT: To show not tell

As I start to float off the ground my hair starts to glow in the sunshine. I look down all I can see is the dark town before the sunrise. When I soar through the mystical sky above the hills, I look down. I can see all the town coming to life. all the shops are opening up, all the curtains are opening. I look up thinking this is the best view well at least that's what I thought. When I look up I can see something in the distance what could it be? That was the end of my big balloon.

Lone Robot

WALT: To Show Not Tell

WALT: Uses Punctuation

As I was walking all I could hear was the sound of crackling underneath my feet. As I look up I can see a chug of black puff so I go and check it out. I see it so I hop on it but I wonder where is it taking me? my tummy was speaking to me then I hear the breaks and the gates open to what looks like a factory I was thinking “this doesn't look good in fact it looked really bad”

Main Star - Take the cake

Hanging Bed description (EDITED)

Hanging Bed description by Samantha

WALT: Show not tell

(EDITED)
After:

As I wake up to the misty sky and the cold air high up in the trees.As my haning bed hangs by 2 very unstable ropes very. As I lay on my duvet that my grandma made including the pillows. I lay on my bed writing in my diary I see something in the distance as I stand up to see what it was as I stand up the cold breeze blows on my face I could sense that something was wrong as I lay down about to drift off to sleep then BANG IT HAPPENS........... (TO BE CONTINUED)

Before:

As I wake up to the misty sky and the cold air I realize I am high up in the trees. My bed hangs by 2 very unstable ropes. I lay on my duvet that my grandma made including the pillows. I lay on my bed writing in my diary and I see something in the distance. As I stand up to see what it was, I felt a cold breeze blowing on my face. I could sense that something was wrong. As I lay down about to drift off to sleep, BANG IT HAPPENED......... (TO BE CONTINUED)

Library book returned 61 years late

Rob Webster cheeked out a book out on 1953 a returned it 61 years later

Ron was working as a research assistant in the university’s social sciences department when he decided to check out the book, ‘Structure and Function in Primitive Society.’

Ron decided to take the book with him when he left the school to work in London, and it was only recently that he realized that it was not actually his and that he had never returned it.

Here is a link to the website I found of

For My Kiwi Kids News Quiz I got 60% out of 100% I hope I will do better next time!!

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